BSL Sentence Structure

[Millie Frost]

I’ve started learning BSL and I’m sort of ‘translating’ songs to practice sentence structure. Could someone help me do this? A couple of lines would be fine, I’m just having a bit of a mental block and can’t seem to do it!

My heart is telling me the telly isn't telling me anything
I need but it needs to keep selling me
Besides celebrities lacking in integrity
Holding up the status quo instead of showing the kids
That they matter, who are they gonna batter next?
Just keep holding their necks and keep selling them sex
It’s better if we keep them perplexed
It's better if we make them want the opposite sex
And disenfranchised young criminal minds
In a car park beside where your nan resides
Are not slow, they've just never been shown
That you should be

 

thank you so much!!

 

[Tals]

BSL doesn't translate word for word. You need the meanings. What's the song trying to say?

[Titi Omoloso]

You can try this...I'm still a beginner. Please correct or add or redo as I am only using signs I know.

My heart say TV sell nothing I need/want,

But TV sell me lives of famous people who lie, pretend life is good (rich, happy, powerful),

Better should teach kids, kids (you, they, your) important, who lie to (fight with) next...

 

All the best